Thursday, July 31, 2008 - Poetry: Best For You
I just felt like writing another poetry tonight lol
Best For You
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4471655
by: Penz
I don't know why...
Why I try...
To be the best for you.
I'm drowning in tears and why this feeling?
The flood is not enough I'm still not sinking,
I may swim my way up again someday,
But right now there's nothing to say,
I don't know why,
Why I try,
To be the best for you,
When we all know why,
That when you cry,
I go - it's my cue,
Why is it always me that have to do it all?
Sometimes I wonder what you do save this fall,
Maybe you are so tired that you see someone unlike me,
You should after all I'm just someone who makes you lonely,
I don't know why,
I always try,
To be the best for you,
When everyone sees why,
That when we cry,
We are long overdue,
I don't know why...
Be free and fly...
Find the best one for you...
I don't know why,
I always cry,
When I'm always hurting you,
Why ask why,
When you cry,
I'm just not the best for you,
I'm just not the best for you,
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Thursday, July 31, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
| Posted by logis |
| Not bad but if i had to give a tip is that in such sort of poems long sentences may break the rhytm. |
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